With her father stabbed to death, her brother caught with the
bloody murder weapon, and her stepmother suspiciously missing,
18-year-old Abigail Sergeant is forced into a dangerous cross
country adventure to uncover the truth and bring the real killer to
justice.
Traveling from England to Australia in the late nineteenth-century,
Abigail and her naive younger brother hope that reuniting with their
father — and his new wife — will offer them security. What awaits them
on the shores of the Swan River dashes any prospects of a blissful life.
Discovering her father murdered and her brother seemingly caught red
handed, Abigail’s life is thrown into turmoil. The police are convinced of
Bertrand’s guilt, but Abigail is determined to prove his innocence, no
matter whatever it takes. The only thing that the now insensible
Bertrand will say about the murder is that their stepmother, Frances,
knows what really happened. Frances, however, has fled south to
Albany, a port from which she plans to board a ship bound for New Zealand. With time running out, Abigail
persuades the police to let her follow Frances, but only if she is chaperoned by the reluctant Constable Ridley
Dunning. Embarking on a heroic train journey across Western Australia, Abigail faces deception, kidnap, sabotage
and arson, forcing her to draw on a resolve she didn’t know she possessed. But will that be enough to save her
brother from injustice?
Building Emotion Through the Eyes of a Teenage Girl by Stephen Childs
Writing about murder and the subsequent challenge of finding the perpetrator presumes many intriguing plot twists. With On Track for Murder, I wanted the characters to experience more than just a series of perplexing puzzles. The drama comes from fear and confusion, deception and dilemma.
From the outset, I sought a character who offered the greatest possibility for change. I looked for the most innocuous of protagonists to challenge the ever present Victorian ideals of the nineteenth century. Abigail Sergeant became that lead character. Discovering a bloody murder traumatises her as would be expected. The determination to find the killer, though, immediately reveals a hidden strength.
My challenge was to put her through terrors that would incapacitate many of the time, but that she would overcome and use to grow. She is chased by a knife wielding attacker and only manages to escape by stealing a railway locomotive. A kidnapping that would see most Victorian women merely sobbing, allows Abigail the opportunity to use her knowledge to blow up a boat and effect her escape. An ever increasing array of terrifying scenarios builds the drama. Even faced with, what seems like, the ultimate betrayal, Abigail manages to prevail.Her final witnessing of the killer’s hanging truly reveals how much she has grown through the traumatic experiences.
My challenge was to put her through terrors that would incapacitate many of the time, but that she would overcome and use to grow. She is chased by a knife wielding attacker and only manages to escape by stealing a railway locomotive. A kidnapping that would see most Victorian women merely sobbing, allows Abigail the opportunity to use her knowledge to blow up a boat and effect her escape. An ever increasing array of terrifying scenarios builds the drama. Even faced with, what seems like, the ultimate betrayal, Abigail manages to prevail.Her final witnessing of the killer’s hanging truly reveals how much she has grown through the traumatic experiences.
Edge of the seat encounters are a great tool for progressing a character. In this story Abigail’s tenacity strengthens, while she continues to prove that you don't need to be perceived as strong to overcome adversity.
Many thanks Stephen for joining us today.
Many thanks Stephen for joining us today.
About the author: Born in Ealing, West London, Stephen Childs immigrated with his family to New Zealand in the
1970s. He has enjoyed a long career in the film and television industry. After a serious health scare in 2005, Childs’
view of life changed. He briefly went into politics as a parliamentary candidate in the national elections, standing
against the now New Zealand Prime Minister, John Key. The drive to pursue new challenges prompted Childs to
relocate to Western Australia, where he now lives in Joondalup, north of Perth, with his family and two cats. In his
spare time, Childs enjoys exploring the great Australian outdoors and studying genealogy. On Track for Murder
by Stephen Childs (published by Clink Street, available September 1st, RRP $12.00 paperback, RRP $7.50 ebook) is
available online from retailers including amazon.com and can be ordered from all good bookstores.
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